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Free Fall by ~Symbolical:iconSymbolical:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open




Life is a free fall with wind at 10 knots,
It burns my face reminding me,
That failing’s always easier than,
Success is very hard
Those dangers aren’t avoided but,
Goals are for the making.
Effort takes willpower that
Goals need for completing
I’ll ride this fall to the end,
For the parachute is like cheating…
©2006-2008 ~Symbolical
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Submitted: December 23, 2006
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~Flaming-Scorpion:iconFlaming-Scorpion: Dec 23, 2006, 4:25:54 PM
mmmm i like it, the flow is a little bumpy but it has a lot of meaning to make up for it :heart: very creative

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~Symbolical:iconSymbolical: Dec 23, 2006, 4:28:13 PM
why thank you sir!
~Flaming-Scorpion:iconFlaming-Scorpion: Dec 23, 2006, 4:28:45 PM
madam XD -ish a chick-

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~I think I know, I don't think I know, I don't think I think I know, I don't think I think~
FIND YOUR INNER POKEMON! :pokeball:
~Symbolical:iconSymbolical: Dec 23, 2006, 4:31:03 PM
*concedes to his mistake...*
~Flaming-Scorpion:iconFlaming-Scorpion: Dec 23, 2006, 4:31:42 PM
-patpat- tis ok!!!! :hug:

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~I think I know, I don't think I know, I don't think I think I know, I don't think I think~
FIND YOUR INNER POKEMON! :pokeball:
~Symbolical:iconSymbolical: Dec 23, 2006, 4:37:07 PM
so- what brought you along to my poem outlet?
~Flaming-Scorpion:iconFlaming-Scorpion: Dec 23, 2006, 4:37:56 PM
-points down to the *random deviant* thingie-

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~I think I know, I don't think I know, I don't think I think I know, I don't think I think~
FIND YOUR INNER POKEMON! :pokeball:
~Symbolical:iconSymbolical: Dec 23, 2006, 4:46:33 PM
lol, you gave me an Idea...
to put a pic of me so people don't call me anything they may regret!!!
~Flaming-Scorpion:iconFlaming-Scorpion: Dec 23, 2006, 4:49:40 PM
XD but we can see that from the little thing on yer page that says if yer a dewd or chick -points to it-

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~I think I know, I don't think I know, I don't think I think I know, I don't think I think~
FIND YOUR INNER POKEMON! :pokeball:
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